Story – any grammar mistakes?
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I'm just wondering if there is any mistakes in this:
Alice sat up and rubbed at her eyes ferociously, making her sight blur. Her mouth felt as dry as cotton, and her cheeks felt sticky, probably from the tears she let flee out last night. She shook off her duvets that were now suffocating her and pushed away the portable heater. She looked in the mirror half-heartedly; she looked like a panda, her eyes rimmed with thick black eyeliner, and her hair, well…she looked like she was modelling for a Bed Head advert. But while noticing all of this only one ...